Tuesday, 23 February 2016

Children's stories

Please find below the children's stories. I have not changed anything as I wanted the children to show exactly what they could do without my help.

A Rich Man by Amber

There was a rich man and he was on his way to greet his royal highness. He had a daughter called Maddison and a son called Geffrey. They were well mannered and extremely spoilt.

They got everything they wanted, exactly when they wanted it. Maddison once got a crystal clear hair brush and a diamond neckless that she never took off her neck.

Her brother was kicking her so the king turned round to sort them out, when he suddenly crashed in to a big fat tree, Maddison and Geoffrey both said ow no. they were gobsmacked what, are we going to do now dad. 
                                    
“We are going to call the AA…” said Dad.
“But that will take forever though,” wined Maddison.
“Then so be it,” said Geoffrey

“Would you rather walk,” said Dad grumpily. “Fine we’ll wait then we’ll wait then” said Maddison and Geoffrey. As quick as a flash we heard a noise coming towards us it’s the AA dad! Finally they came to a halt they weren’t rich or any think… finally they got to the queens mansion but by the time they got there it was super time. All they could could smell was a lovely roast diner. That Queen ruby had been preparing. She greeted the children she franticly said there is some food on the kitchen table. “save some for pudding she shouted after us”. I need to talk to you in peace without the children knowing because it’s about Christmas peasants…


Sir Coolalot by Ashleigh 

Sir Coolalot always look at the soft fluffy clouds. One day he was  standing outside the Palace when he saw an old wrinkly lady, she shouted ‘’ Why can’t I came in, Why?”  She suddenly transformed into a Butterfly. 

  Shocked he shouted ‘’How did you do that.’’

‘’ You  don’t need to know what I just did. ‘’ He ran to the humongous pink spotted red Palace. He said, “An old lady has just transformed into a Butterfly. 

The fat King said “Go and catch her then’’ and Sir Coolalot went on his way to  get her. In the forest he saw a  group of birds  then he saw a Butterfly.  

Could that be her!  He then got out his long fishing net and caught the stunning Butterfly.  It was her! He was so happy he rode back to the palace and the king said, “You have become king!” He was so happy to be king. 

He then found out the Butterfly was his mum.

BANG! His Mum had gone Sir Coolalot had to go with her home ‘’ Why  can’t you be a normal humun, why ? said Sir Coolalot excitedly and he got on his new horse and galloped on his way. 

Two weeks later he was looking at the fluffy clouds and he married a pretty Princess.  Sometimes he rode with his new Wife.  He ordered the Servant to bring him his dusty binocularss and after he wiped the dust off them.  His Wife looked at the clouds with him to remember his mum.  He and she lived happily ever after.

One year late sir coolalot said to everyone to stay in they home’s all the people replied you can’t do this  to us  you have to do want  I say or else  you be loock in one of my smelly stinky ROOM im am clear ok  

After them two year he turned  in to a nasty little Monster for the rest of his live and the queen too.

Kitty Cat Tom by Georgia

Lilly is an ordinary nine year old girl, she has an ordinary life but she has a cat called Tom who is quite fat and can hardly walk.
She wants to find out what her cat does after everyone’s gone to bed. 

One night after her parents had gone to bed, she crept downstairs to see what Tom was doing. But when she got downstairs he was nowhere to be seen. So she got a bag of crisps and sat on the sofa to wait for Tom.

She was so exhausted that she fell asleep. In the morning when Lilly woke up she saw Tom curled up on the sofa, she felt a bit annoyed with herself for not staying awake but she was determined to stay awake that evening.

This became a regular pattern and every night she had the intention of staying awake but fell asleep

One night she went down stairs as normal but this time was extra special. Tom has been putting on some weight lately.

When Lilly saw Tom`s basket she shouted, “Mum, Dad come look at this!” They rushed downstairs as fast as their feet could carry them.  When they looked in the basket there were three soft tiny cute kittens.  That answered why Tom was getting so fat…. Wait Tom is a girl!  What shall I call the kittens? I know fluffy mittens and patch hmm Tom needs a new name since he (opps) she is a girl Oh no.

Doug by Harry

Doug the billionaire and his four friends were the best friends ever in the whole world. Every night they travel to the pub and they watched football on a big screen.
In the evening when Doug was snuggled up in bed he would dream about getting a new car and that morning it came true.

So he called his friends and they came around right away and said, “That is a really cool car!”
Just then a robber broke into a house nearby and the alarm went off like a screaming elephant. Doug’s friend the policeman stared to run. He dropped his hand cuffs on the road. Pushing the robber to the floor, Doug’s friend went for his handcuffs but they weren’t there.

Out of the blue Doug shouted, “I’ve got your handcuffs.”

The policeman drove the robber to the police station. As he was delivering the robber something blew up in the distance.

It was a helicopter. There was lots of people at the investigation.

Later that day, Doug went to the shop and brought himself some biscuits and snuggled up and watched a film.         

Space adventure by Harley

One night there was terrifying noises, there was creaking all over the house, banging doors. Waking me up and scaring me, you’ll never believe what this horrifying thing was. I t was an ALIEN! It walked into my bedroom drooling its disgusting green slime all over the place. I was hiding under my cover, but, it found me, grabbed me and took me to its ship.

I was trying to get out but it was no use. He had locked all the doors and windows. So I’m on my journey to space.
At first it was scary but now it’s quite fun and extremely fascinating. I’m the first kid in space!

When I get back to school and tell everyone, I’ll be famous. I’ll probably win 1000 pounds, trophies and all sorts of other stuff. When I got home I told my mum but she didn’t believe me she said I was just having a nightmare, the next night. 

Can you guess what happened?

It happened all over again. The next morning I told my mum again and she said that she knew because she was the alien. I was shocked at what she had just told me. And she tricked me because yesterday, she said that I was just having a nightmare, but all along it was my mum in an alien costume. I hope she doesn’t wake me up again because I haven’t had two days sleep. But she did. 

In the morning I told my mum why she woke me up again. But she said that she didn’t mum said that dad did it. THIS IS MY WORST NIGHTMARE EVER!!!

After a week they stopped because they got tired, and I ripped up there costume.

Holiday Dilemma by Henry


Joe woke up with his usual jolly, light hearted smile. He knew it was going to be a good day. He was going on holiday to fantastic America.

Joe got to the airport just before the plane departed. He was relieved he had got there in time. The trip was so prolonged he fell asleep. When he landed a little, green, old jeep came to pick him up but Joe saw them go past the grand hotel he was meant to be staying in.

“Were are we going,” Joe angrily questioned.

There was no reply. “I said were are we goinngg,” he said frustrated but before he could finish he was quickly thrown out of the jeep. He slid through an open door and his head hit a button. This caused an alien to be released from its chamber.

The alien let out its friends. “Oh no,” Joe said as he ran 
out of the door. Joe was worried he had done something wrong.  He looked back and saw he had just entered the secret military base; area 51. He heard loud screaming as he ran. The aliens must be attacking the scientists!

The screaming stopped. Aliens flew out in U.F.Os going in different directions destroying anything in site. Joe heard exploding, lasers being shot and more screaming. Had he started this? Had he started this dilemma?

He was bolting to an unguarded space shuttle wanting to get to space, away from the screaming and people disappearing.

Joe was frantically pressing any button in sight to try and make the shuttle fly. He hit a green pentagonal button which luckily activated the shuttle. As he was taking off an alien glimpsed him out of the corner of his five eyes and started shooting at the shuttle he was escaping in.

Suddenly the heat of the hot, shuttle flames exploded the alien’s spaceship.   

2 years have elapsed since that day and Joe is distraught, living alone on the moon. Surviving on eating cheese and drinking rations left on the shuttle.   

Then he heard a faint but audible count down, 5…4…3…2…1…………”BOOM”. Earth had exploded! Rubble shattered on his round space helmet. One of the big rocks hit him hard and he fell slowly to the ground.
“Soldier, Soldier,” said a man dressed in a military suit was pouring dirty, cold water over Joe.
“Wha’,” asked Joe?
“You have been accepted into area 51,” he replied in a low tone.
“Area 51 wi-t-th aliens,” he stuttered, ”Oh no.”


Brooklyn Pigeon by Kyle

In Brooklyn there was a pigeon called Rodney he was a normal modern day pigeon, or was he? He didn’t steel chips, he didn’t sit in the road or do anything like that and he is very sensible and very unique. Once he even pinched someone’s chair and slipped it in front of an ice cream stall and bought one! You see he works for a pigeon unit called pigeon 101, they fight crime and put those fending criminals in prison. He’s very neat and tidy the only thing is he has a problem with pooing on people’s heads! He’s trying to work out a way to stop it. When he does people try to hit him and whip him with their dog leads. Although he can’t stop it, it certainly does not bother him. He is the head of the unit. However, he is not your average boss you see he’s very kind and polite. He can sometimes get a bit cranky but that is only when he has cranberry juice.

Rodney has a wing-man called Tubby. He helps him when Rodney’s in need. But in the past hours Tubby has been in hospital as he had severe car crash.

There was someone loitering about a bank with a deadly looking hammer and he looked very suspicious. I sailed over to have a look but before I had a chance the strange guy lobed the huge hammer at me…

Out of the blue tubby launched himself into the hammer, he was gone[KN1]  laying on the rough tarmac I was in terrible shock! But suddenly there was life! He flapped his wing and coughed into action he got up and he was still a bit dizzy but he was good meanwhile, the stranger was stumbling away he wasn’t hard to catch him because he had injured him self

So for the rest of the night he was in prison! When tubby was in the station he was still sleepy. When I went on my next mission it didn’t feel the same without tubby, all I could think of is drifting in the breeze with tubby. That’s when I saw a fire, now I know I’m not a firepigeon but duty calls! I go to a water tower and grabbed a heavy water bucket and drag it to the fire. I plonked it in the fire however, it didn’t work!

I decided to leave it to the fire pigeons, they did their stuff.

When I got back home I turned on the news. I noticed a pigeon lying in the road so I slipped of my dressing gown and zoomed out the slipped up window and down into the streets. I pass through the dump and over the Brooklyn Bridge and to the scene. It was badly injured. I went to get a vet and she took it in.

I went to the vets the next week and he was up and ready and that’s how I met johny. Let’s party!!    






Scary Spiders by Levi 


Sarah the spider has had a lot of terrible experiences in the past. Her family was becoming EXTINCT until one day she stumbled across an exquisite and expensive house. It would cost one billion flies to even spin a web and stay in it just for a week!

Anyways back to the story, Sarah squeezed through the key hole and fell to the floor. To her amazement it was abandoned with sad rugs and self-portraits of famous people. 

The cobwebs shivered in the cold, Sarah crawled over to a still glowing potion that looked very unusual for a potion so she climbed up it “baba da” which roughly translates to “don’t fall” the noise was so shattering because it bounced of the damp smelly walls.

She fell in and as she did, she said, “Bubu da boo.” In a very loud tone which translates to “Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!”
This is the end people but what’s that, she’s growing. Now she’s got human powers so she can speak English. “Bow down to me you little flies if not I’ll lick you up like how you try and flatten us spi- ahhhhhhhhhhhhh” and with that an egg sack popped out of the ravenous beast.

Everyone ran except one brave man, scared, tired… and hungry as usual because he would forget to make his lunch. He threw an unusual looking potion at Sarah just like the one she fell in but red. It hit her right in the eye. “OWWWW you will pay for that” she snarled but before she could do anything she felt weak. One of her babies rushed over in a hurry and touched her on the back. They both felt weak and the situation kept on going until every single spider shrunk “YAAAAY” the crowd shrieked. The brave man didn’t just have a sandwich he had a three course feast with the city! Sarah had still got human powers but not for long “why me” she said before getting eaten by a bird.

A Full Moon by Megan

I raced through the forest. My hair whipped across my face and the wind howled in my ears. Glancing back in fright, I saw the gloomy black figure closing in on me. I felt a sharp tug on the back of my head as I was pulled towards my doom.

Too scared nearly to breathe, I stared at the dark shape. As it came into focus, I saw dark matted hair coving its face. Its long snout was embellished with pure white teeth that were razor sharp. Two bright green, evil eyes stared at me and I hid my face from the wolf!

Snarling, the wolf leaned in, bearing its gleaming fangs. The wolf scratched me with its claws, tearing my skin. I screamed, trying to wriggle out of the wolf’s firm grip. The wolf lunged at me and l felt an agonizing pain in my right arm. Gripping it in pain, I cried out. I fell to the ground; the damp leaves clung to my skin. My sight was becoming hazy, as I saw the glowing orange beam of the sunrise rising up in the sky. The wolf appeared to have seen it too and it gave a little yelp, before thundering into the darkest part of the forest. Then everything went black!

The next morning I abruptly awoke and peered down at my arm. A deep gash was embedded in my flesh and dried blood coved it. I stood up and wobbled over to the stream running through the forest. Lowering my arm into the ice cold water, I bathed my cut. The trickling water tickled my skin and although I was feeling down, a small smile managed to creep onto my face. I ripped a piece of white materiel of my shirt and wrapped it around my bite. The scarlet blood seeped through and I watched the cloth turn red.

 As I made my way back home, I remembered what happened last night. Why did the wolf bite me? Why did it run away at the sunrise? I pondered over these thoughts all the way back to my little cottage. Walking down the stone path, I yawned. My arm ached but I bared the pain.

 Although I was extremely sleepy, I made my way to the kitchen to have breakfast. Though as soon as I had finished eating, I flopped down on my bed and fell asleep.

One month later, I stood in front of my mirror and stared brushing my hair. The moon shone in through my window and my face stared tingling all over. My cheeks itched and long, brown hair started growing over my face. My mouth grew longer into a snout. Suddenly I knew what was happening to me. I lifted up my head and howled.  

The Friendly Dragon by Charley-Jaide 

There once lived a dragon that was so friendly that everyone liked him he was kind. But the horrible, terrible creature that ever lived, his name was called Sprite he always caused trouble to any one who went near him, he might even hurt you if you go near that horrible vampire. The kindest dragon had a castle that had a devil tale on it.                                                                 
But he is actually really kind but some vampire dragon take the mick out of him. This terrible vampire is also a sprite that is mean all the time. There was one elf that was very kind to give money to poor people she is very helpful too.
Her name is Sabrina her best friends name is Jessica she’s very kind as well. The next day there was a new girl dragon called Britney she’s a kind dragon as well. She helped people on her first day.
Then everybody was invited to a party.
Well just one creature. They didn’t invite the Sprite Vampire because he might hurt someone. It might be the new girl.

On Wednesday they had lots of new buildings that are different schools for the different types of creatures.          




Elisha and the germs by Keira




Elisha was late for her tap dance practice. She got to the colossal hall and she rapidly got changed and then Elisha went to put her dazzling tap shoes on but in a blink of an eye the tap shoes were gone!
Meanwhile Elisha`s manager shouted out, “Elishaaa hurry up your performance is in about ten minutes and you haven’t practiced!”
So Elisha told her manager that her shoes had gone.
However when the manager went to see if the shoes were there and guess what, the shoes were there. Sparkling with silver and little gems on.
When Elisha went over to see the tap shoes she saw there was something moving around on them. She picked them up and shook them out on her hands. About five minutes later Elisha forgot to wash her hands before she had her lunch. Suddenly Elisha had an annoying sneezing fit. Frantically she started looking for tissues to blow her nose. Now she couldn’t perform.
Washing her hands, she got rid of the little slimy germs so thankfully she could perform. As she was walking off the stage, her phone beeped.
“Oh no,” whispered Elisha.     
She has found out the germs had taken over the world.
“I will have to save the world once again,” said Elisha.
Although Elisha had a bad day she still did very well in her dance and got thousands of claps.
From then on Elisha had no more problems with germs but quite a few with humans and other weird things that seem to appear in her life.
Two years later Elisha had another problem and it wasn’t with germs, it was with the internet because she had to write about her dance show. Then she had to post it on her dance blog to try and beat the other dance team with the likes and comments.
The team that Elisha is trying to beat is called Dance like no one’s watching. Do you think it’s a cool name? In Dance like no one’s watching they had one hundred and fifty likes and forty thousand comments. Elisha is disgusted about that.
When Elisha got home she told her mum about what had happened with the internet and how many likes and comments the other team got. “Oh dear darling I’m sure your team will overtake them.”
Soon Elisha went up to her bedroom to watch the television she turned it on to the news and guess what she was on the news!! She was amazed!
Elisha ran down the stairs faster than rocket she shouted out “MUM I’M ON THE NEWS.” Mum ran up the stairs with Elisha behind her and took a video of Elisha and she posted on Facebook Twitter and even Google!! Elisha’s mum was very very proud of Elisha as you may know.

The next day when Elisha went to school she said to her friends, teachers and many more but most people just ignored her and said “I don’t care.” Neither did Elisha.



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